A glass of juice | Short poem about life and death
My body is a glass
Filled with the juice of life.
Slices of sweet memories at the brink,
Waiting for someone to drink.
Here comes death with
An empty mind.
Sucks whole life with
The straw of time.
– unni babu
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Ahaaaa !! Short & sweet & very deep with words
Thank you so much poet ji 🙂 <3
Pleasure always for ur words !!
The sketch is a visual description of the poem . Rare talent you have .👍
Thank you so much rita ji. 🙂
Wow nice poem.
Thank you daily poet who is busy nowadays with studies 🙂 i hope ur exam was easy
Yep
Wow, this is so deep Unni ji!!
Thank you ji 🙂 i was expecting ur feedback and I missed u
So sweet of you! My absolute pleasure ji 😊
Very nice! And so true! Where does time go?! The golden question.
Thank you blogger mom 🙂 have a nice day
You’re welcome Unni, likewise.
Amazing! Expressed so easily such depth!
Thank you 😊
It hardly counts how much the lines are in a poem,but the intensity of the vision that it provides and creativity it unfurls is momentous.To your readers,every poem is nebula sprinkled with stardust.
Your comments are always like a great poem 😮
Is it? well Thanks unni.
Unni, this is profound. Just when one has decided to let go and enjoy life, death comes saying ..let us go 🙂
Thank u so much sir for ur valuable feedback 💙