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Unseen emotions poem | An unexplored side of life

What hurts us the most? I think it is the unseen emotions buried deep inside our minds. Despite surrounded by many people, the feeling of loneliness hurts us the most. Everybody is there to clap for you on your success but nobody to listen to your problems. Everyone is interested in asking “How much do you earn?” instead of “How are you?” No wonder why the suicide rate is on a rise. The world has more people to understand complex scientific equations but fewer people to understand human emotions. The essence of a relationship is lost and now it is more like a business. People are very generous in sharing optimistic messages/quotes through WhatsApp but turn a blind eye when someone asks for a real help.Β Unseen emotions poem is dedicated to all lonely guys out there who are waiting for someone to understand them.

Unseen emotions poem

Oh, my beloved friends and relatives,
I am not a money-making machine.
There is an ocean of emotions,
Left in the depths of my mind unseen.

Oh, my sweetheart, who is always mean,
I can’t always make you feel like the queen.
Talking to myself in front a laptop screen,
Waiting for someone to enter this lonely scene.


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25 thoughts on “Unseen emotions poem | An unexplored side of life”

  1. You spoke my mind. Everybody will comment on your photos as ,” oh you looking fat, thin, beautiful, tall, short etc etc but not one will ask you ,” Are you ok, are you happy,
    That’s the reality now!!

    1. me too πŸ™
      people are interested in asking and proposing- “hey unni, you still so handsome, tall, intelligent, cute, sexy etc etc. I wanna marry you.”
      Nobody is interested knowing my inner feelings πŸ™

  2. We are the only ones who actually care for ourselves. So I think it will be healthy for us if we express ourselves to the fullest take that facade down and just be ourselves. Express our emotions to the future and live our lives to the lees. Carpe Diem. Love the poem it’s so profound and deep.

    1. (That embarrassing moment the comment has higher quality than the entire post :-3 )

      Yeah.. yeah
      you are right πŸ™‚

  3. Unni, your words speak truth: “People are very generous in sharing optimistic messages/quotes through WhatsApp but turn a blind eye when someone asks for a real help.” What’s really going on here is that people are unable to witness others suffering because it might bring them closer to their own…this so called “positive’ thinking is actually a form of denial…

    That you are willing to put yourself out there so honestly and with so much poignancy means that eventually you will find others of like mind and heart (body).

    And by the way – think about it – our emotions and feelings are stored in our bodies so many people just split themselves in two – mind goes into denial and body weeps….and “dis-ease” manifests in all sorts of insidious ways. As you say, no wonder the suicide rate increases…

    Loneliness can only be dealt with if someone is willing to witness your sorrow…I too know what its like to be lonely and others do too. We need to speak of it so that we can bridge the gap that we have created between each other.

    1. Absolutely right
      Without someone to listen and understand our sorrow, life is in self-destruction mode

    1. Thank you ji πŸ™‚
      Happy sunday to u from optimist unni
      Oh, and pessimist unni wishes u “advance Monday good morning” :-3

      1. Haha…
        When you are a home maker, the thought of Monday doesn’t bother you 😊 but the flip side be like there’s no Sunday- you are on duty 24*7 πŸ˜‚…
        See Human Being always unhappy & grass on other side always seems greener.πŸ€” I hope I said that right

        1. 24×7 duty
          Omg
          Looks like someone needs women’s Horlicks in a cup of Bournvita milk shake πŸ€”

  4. Β Super work Sir !!

    People are very generous in sharing optimistic messages/quotes through WhatsApp but turn a blind eye when someone asks for a real help.Β ##Agreed πŸ’―

    Loneliness is not being alone , it is the feeling arises when we have no one to share ourselves with at a time when we are surrounded by many & loneliness is actually helplessness of a broken heart.And this is the reason behind the increasing suicide rates.πŸ’―

    Enjoyed reading
    Awesome poem
    Keep sharing πŸ’œ

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